she was sultry
he was handsome
she was mellow
he was agile
they saw
they desired
they hooked
and got booked
for the rest of their lives
love it is?
she was charming
he was adorable
she would read
he would watch
she would quote
he would yawn
and she was disappointed
love it is?
he would laugh his heart
she would smile
she wore checks
he liked stripes
he would joke
she would snide
and people called it love
and tied them up the altar
love it is?
she was unsure
he didn't care
but consumed in passion
of the bodily lure
they succumbed to their instinct
and crochet the knot of marriage
love it is?
they were impassioned
they were insane
they were careless
they seldom refrain
he fervently kissed
she replied
and he was in her
that very night
AND SHE DIED...
of the numbness
at the time astride
it was a communion
of both bodies
hollow to the core
she never lived
from that very night
he was a player
she was taciturn
he tried
faced spite
he turned to places
to get sufficed
and she despised
the stinking man
lying beside
and they call it love
at first sight...
he was handsome
she was mellow
he was agile
they saw
they desired
they hooked
and got booked
for the rest of their lives
love it is?
she was charming
he was adorable
she would read
he would watch
she would quote
he would yawn
and she was disappointed
love it is?
he would laugh his heart
she would smile
she wore checks
he liked stripes
he would joke
she would snide
and people called it love
and tied them up the altar
love it is?
she was unsure
he didn't care
but consumed in passion
of the bodily lure
they succumbed to their instinct
and crochet the knot of marriage
love it is?
they were impassioned
they were insane
they were careless
they seldom refrain
he fervently kissed
she replied
and he was in her
that very night
AND SHE DIED...
of the numbness
at the time astride
it was a communion
of both bodies
hollow to the core
she never lived
from that very night
he was a player
she was taciturn
he tried
faced spite
he turned to places
to get sufficed
and she despised
the stinking man
lying beside
and they call it love
at first sight...
Brilliant! Loved the post!
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thankyou :)
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thnk u :)
ReplyDeleteThis might be true for so many.
ReplyDeleteYou wrote it very well.
rolling you...
take care
@rainboy :)
ReplyDeleteTemplate is really very beautiful. Pink background is very soothing.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. :) Love is expressed so well.
Best wishes. :)
hey chandrika :)
ReplyDeleteglad u liked it, poeple are generally confused between love and lust (which is totality normal and happening in actual) . this is just one example of it :)
hey awesum piece of poetry....very sensitive and touchin! keep up the good work payal!....
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